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Wrong (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
The burning pain, inside me Hurts like a bitch, and wont let me be I hurt those I love, and make them cry I have to sit and watch, another tear fall from their eye I'm lost in the dark, without a light Everything I do, I start a fight I am scared, of what may be What is wrong, wrong with me

Up the ladder: lackluster fear
Down the ladder: I Retry My Resolve

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7652
Posted: December 24, 2002 2:44 AM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2002 2:44 AM PST
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Comments:
[5] <~> @ 67.84.171.238 | 24-Dec-02/6:56 PM | Reply
you have a yeast infection, and PMS. see your local chemist for some OTC relief. everyone will thank you.
[6] brazen @ 65.237.116.252 | 24-Dec-02/10:01 PM | Reply
stop stealing your dad's computer for one...
[n/a] Sugarbbybuttrfly @ 152.163.189.171 > brazen | 24-Dec-02/10:08 PM | Reply
but...but...I like stealing things from him! He doesnt deserve it ne ways. Hes mean. Maybe next time I'll just steal ur computer...I like that idea.
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