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An Illuminator (Free verse) by hobojo
A remnant of enchanted doctrine Much unseen to his eyes Illusion conjured sleight of hand He did devise Transcending this deception Finds vagrant disregard For anything unfamiliar Anything marred An agile mind can comprehend From disarray he did descend To sort out cants he did intend But nothing can he ever mend

Up the ladder: Instance of Twinning
Down the ladder: my dead parade

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4857
Posted: December 23, 2002 11:37 AM PST; Last modified: September 17, 2003 10:21 AM PDT
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[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Sep-03/2:45 PM | Reply
Faustiatious
[7] nentwined @ 209.31.226.178 | 17-Sep-03/6:16 PM | Reply
eh?

7 for confusing me because I'm tired of giving out 4's.
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