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An Illuminator (Free verse) by hobojo

A remnant of enchanted doctrine Much unseen to his eyes Illusion conjured sleight of hand He did devise Transcending this deception Finds vagrant disregard For anything unfamiliar Anything marred An agile mind can comprehend From disarray he did descend To sort out cants he did intend But nothing can he ever mend

nentwined 17-Sep-03/6:16 PM
eh?

7 for confusing me because I'm tired of giving out 4's.




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