poemranker ::Forever by Sugarbbybuttrfly

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 30285

Forever

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Dec 2002 · 0 comments

I make you cry and give you pain I'm turning your life into an endless rain The way I act and things I feel Cause problems and you dont know how to deal I'm killing us and its because of me How can this happen we're meant to be I love you to death more than you know Even though sometimes it doesn't always show I'm sorry about me being messed up in the head But without you I'd surely be dead Things will get fixed I'm hoping they still can be You are my soulmate Forever you and me

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 3.80 weighted 4.86 rank 10444 views 156 View voting details →

5 votes so far. Yours would make 6.5 votes so far

0 comments

Nobody has said anything yet.