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Forever (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
I make you cry and give you pain I'm turning your life into an endless rain The way I act and things I feel Cause problems and you dont know how to deal I'm killing us and its because of me How can this happen we're meant to be I love you to death more than you know Even though sometimes it doesn't always show I'm sorry about me being messed up in the head But without you I'd surely be dead Things will get fixed I'm hoping they still can be You are my soulmate Forever you and me

Up the ladder: battle
Down the ladder: Legend

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8
Weighted score: 4.8569565
Overall Rank: 10461
Posted: December 15, 2002 9:22 PM PST; Last modified: December 15, 2002 9:22 PM PST
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