poemranker ::battle by debased

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Free verse № 28007

battle

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Nov 2002 · 2 comments

spirals of black dust surrounded by lavender specks wave on waves flowing out crying out for love

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[n/a] Caducus 2-Dec-02/8:50 AM Reply
I'm intrigued by the expression in this piece, noones commented, i reckon their confused, HELP !
[n/a] debased › Caducus 2-Dec-02/3:59 PM Reply
Sorry for confuseing you!

The first 3 lines represent black magic an evil act
The last 3 what its doing
It just sort of states how the world isn???t as black and white as society makes it out to be
And how little we all actually know about what???s really going on

The reason behind and action should justify it
Not the action it???s self

The title should be changed