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battle (Free verse) by debased spirals of black dust
surrounded by lavender specks
wave on waves
flowing out
crying out
for love
Up the ladder:
A week of you
Down the ladder:
Forever
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Posted: November 30, 2002 1:53 PM PST; Last modified: November 30, 2002 1:53 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8569565 Overall Rank: 10460 Comments:
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The first 3 lines represent black magic an evil act
The last 3 what its doing
It just sort of states how the world isn???t as black and white as society makes it out to be
And how little we all actually know about what???s really going on
The reason behind and action should justify it
Not the action it???s self
The title should be changed