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Antiquity (Free verse) by Andre
Mystic temples far from here
Cryptic colors and hieroglyphs unknown
Of your mind and soul divide
Us and worlds of remote venture
But to view the walls you have
Is like to look in your eyes
And see the ancient fires
That warmed passions love of old
The freshness of flora and sweet wet wind
Is the waft of closeness of you I scent?
Clear crystal waters from pristine skies
Is pure and quenches like kisses from you
Quiet darkness of night fills the head
And sundowns the restless soul
For you I wait, and toss in sleep
Til morning smile wakes me with your light.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5620
Posted: December 15, 2002 12:29 PM PST; Last modified: December 15, 2002 12:29 PM PST
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