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Strike Me Down (Lyric) by cacophony
You tell me of a time when you When standing up on top your roof Will set alight what lies below The flames will lick and like you so You'll stare up high into the sky Implore the Lord to strike you down With crazy eyes behind lids shut You'll smile cos it'll wake those bastard neighbours up

Up the ladder: When Im Gone
Down the ladder: Curse fait

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11633
Posted: December 14, 2002 12:47 PM PST; Last modified: December 14, 2002 12:47 PM PST
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