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a light in your eyes (Free verse) by crin
turn the screw a little tighter
drive the idea home
a firefly at play
inside your skull
lighting up the surface so dimly
pushing against the darkness
sliding against the resistance
a soft glow so pretty in the recesses
dancing through your eyes
like the devil exploding from heaven
a universal equation
fitting all the pieces together
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5852
Posted: December 6, 2002 12:29 AM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2002 12:29 AM PST
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