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a light in your eyes (Free verse) by crin
turn the screw a little tighter drive the idea home a firefly at play inside your skull lighting up the surface so dimly pushing against the darkness sliding against the resistance a soft glow so pretty in the recesses dancing through your eyes like the devil exploding from heaven a universal equation fitting all the pieces together

Up the ladder: Summer Repose
Down the ladder: To My Grave

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5851
Posted: December 6, 2002 12:29 AM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2002 12:29 AM PST
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[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 6-Dec-02/10:58 AM | Reply
nice.
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