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a light in your eyes (Free verse) by crin

turn the screw a little tighter drive the idea home a firefly at play inside your skull lighting up the surface so dimly pushing against the darkness sliding against the resistance a soft glow so pretty in the recesses dancing through your eyes like the devil exploding from heaven a universal equation fitting all the pieces together

<~> 6-Dec-02/10:58 AM
nice.




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