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The Slanty Shanty (Free verse) by Quarton
I pulled over and sut off the engine,
long buried memories welling up
in a myriad of thoughts and images;
as if a floodgate suddenly opened,
rushing water transformed into
changing patterns of remembrance.
It was an old house,
built at the century's turn,
white with two huge oak trees in front,
like towering sentinels;
only a stump remaining
of the even larger oak that once grew
in the back.
Over forty years have passed
since we lived there,
my parents and older brother Bob.
Mom pregnant, I'm sure by mistake;
she in her late thirties
but I never gave it much thought;
I was only ten.
There was an old shed in the back,
out beyond the garden
next to the alley by the oak tree;
tilted to one side and dilapidated.
Thanks to dad's penchant for nicknames,
we called it the slanty shanty.
Mom always telling dad it was unsafe
and ought to be torn down;
he always in agreement though
we knew he never would.
We had all developed an affiity
and peculiar admiration for the shed,
beaten and battered yet
still standing after so many years.
In warm weather,
the kitchen door was usually open;
an old wood framed screen
keeping most of the insects out.
It had a new spring dad put on,
too short and when closing;
just letting go really,
it would gain momentum, snapping shut
with surprising force, the crack
like a gun firing;
flushing the birds in the garden.
And mom yelling not to slam thr door
though she knew it was the spring
and dad calling it our
noise making scarecrow.
I vividly recall that April evening,
sky black and ominous as I took shelter;
mom and dad gone to a movie,
my brother visiting a friend.
From the cellar, I could hear thunder
over the wind and rain
as the tempest raged;
the old house straining
under nature's onslaught.
Then abruptly, the storm was over
as I cautiously emerged from the cellar,
into the kitchen and out the back door;
stunned as I viewed the devastation
left in the storm's wake.
The giant oak had snapped in two
like a twig, its immensity
covering most of the garden;
leaves and branches scattered everywhere.
As the evening sun broke through
the thinning cloud cover,
I could see an outline
through fallen branches;
a few steps to my left and a clear view;
old slanty shanty bathed in light
and still standing.
Somehow, it had survived the storm's fury
unscathed.
I remember smiling as I stood staring
in disbelief and wonderment
those many years ago,
thinking of the storm and the shanty;
naively pondering why God
had wasted a miracle
on that rundown old shed.
And I still wonder to this day,
though randomness
has no secrets to reveal
nor meaning it must defend.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.428571
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Posted: December 1, 2002 9:45 AM PST; Last modified: December 1, 2002 9:45 AM PST
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What does "slightly too long" mean? Something a bit more
specific would be welcomed. Content or meaning or style
or emotions evoked, etc. Thanks for the read.