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Sealed with a kiss (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
How can I tell you I'm not here to play All I'm asking for Is for you to look my way Give me a chance To show you that your safe If you don't believe these words I write Just look upon my face This smile says I care And I would never cheat you These eyes say I'm you And breaking your heart, I would never do These arms are here to hold you Through the good times and the bad And this heart is here to give you The true love you never had I wish I could tell you Straight to your face But everytime I look at you My heart starts to race So the only way I can tell you Is just like this This poem is for you Dan And its sealed with a kiss

Up the ladder: Tommorows future
Down the ladder: Wedding Announcement

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8
Weighted score: 4.7377534
Overall Rank: 11721
Posted: November 29, 2002 5:47 PM PST; Last modified: November 29, 2002 5:47 PM PST
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Comments:
[10] emilys369 @ 66.188.239.117 | 29-Nov-02/7:06 PM | Reply
awww thats really sweet! words come from the heart and this is definatly from the heart! keep writing!
[0] razorgrin @ 142.166.233.182 | 29-Nov-02/7:13 PM | Reply
utter tripe. that poeme definitely comes from the colon.
[n/a] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 | 30-Nov-02/5:36 PM | Reply
um, should you have maybe put this in a letter to dan, so that only he saw it? i wish you had done that. truly i do.
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