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Tommorows future (Other) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
I finally looked around me today and saw what this world is coming to. Twelve year old sluts walking around in tube tops and miniskirts. Smoking their cigarettes and licking their lips for the seventeen year olds. I watch in disgust how another big boy does another cradal robbing. If only these babies knew what they were getting themselves into. A dark world of rape, drugs, murder and lies. To them it will no loger be " The land of opportunity." They are the ones who end up being the 15 year old mothers, wishing they could go back and change their ways. Well guess what sweethart, there is no going back. Whats done is done. Your life is over. Which moves us onto the next biggest problem, suicide. What is it? How is it done? Does it really work.....?

Down the ladder: Sealed with a kiss

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8
Weighted score: 4.7377534
Overall Rank: 11720
Posted: November 20, 2002 2:33 PM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2002 2:33 PM PST
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 20-Nov-02/5:20 PM | Reply
I hope you fall over and injure your beak.
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