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Another world (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
Why are the ones I love always taken from my grasp Just when I start to feel happy it never seems to last It seems the world is against me And I will always fail And these are the many reasons why I am so frail I've noticed the pattern it gets clearer everyday I'm finally accepting the truth nothing will ever go my way No love just loss no hopes or dreams I am slowly starting to fall apart at the seams Tell me I'm wrong go ahead and try I won't believe you and I'll still want to die Feel free to say 'I love you' and I do stand a chance But I know the truth and I wont get to dance In time you will see that I am right So dont try to ignore and dont try to fight There is no wishing theres nothing you can do All thats left is pain and depression inside you.

Up the ladder: sensitivity as ruination
Down the ladder: Bursts

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10185
Posted: November 20, 2002 2:30 PM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2002 2:30 PM PST
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[8] Ranger @ 212.219.142.161 | 21-Nov-02/2:15 AM | Reply
Strange how this relates so closely to so many people's lives.
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