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Another world (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
Why are the ones I love
always taken from my grasp
Just when I start to feel happy
it never seems to last
It seems the world is against me
And I will always fail
And these are the many reasons
why I am so frail
I've noticed the pattern
it gets clearer everyday
I'm finally accepting the truth
nothing will ever go my way
No love just loss
no hopes or dreams
I am slowly starting
to fall apart at the seams
Tell me I'm wrong
go ahead and try
I won't believe you
and I'll still want to die
Feel free to say 'I love you'
and I do stand a chance
But I know the truth
and I wont get to dance
In time you will see
that I am right
So dont try to ignore
and dont try to fight
There is no wishing
theres nothing you can do
All thats left is pain
and depression inside you.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10185
Posted: November 20, 2002 2:30 PM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2002 2:30 PM PST
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