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Bursts (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
Sunlight bursts through my window in the morning Only because you have entered my life There arent enough words To describe how greatful I am And thank you isnt enough You woke me up Taught me to act my age And make me want to be a better person But the more you do It makes me yearn for your touch Why are you the one who fits the discription for my dream man Why are you the one that I admire look up to and love I tried to ignore Not let myself open to you Now allow the feelings to grow And even though its early to say I know that loving you is possible Dont be afriad you will never be hurt by me I'm giving you the lifetime guarentee I'll never do you wrong I'm giving it as much time as I can But it wont be long until I burst Like the sunlight bursting through my windows

Up the ladder: Another world
Down the ladder: The high diving board

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10186
Posted: November 20, 2002 2:31 PM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2002 2:31 PM PST
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