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Wind Whisper (Free verse) by abbaslittleclingon I love to hear the wind Whisper so soft and so kind
Surrounding my spirit my soul and my mind
He blends with a mist from the depths of the sea
And the two become one with nature and me
I am watching the stars in their beauty and grace
A dazzling fire suspended in space
With the waves rolling in determined and strong
Filling my heart with a heavenly song
Ah,The Lilly Of The Valley is beckoning me
My
Refuge and strength in the midst of the sea
authorL.G-O.
Up the ladder:
The Office
Down the ladder:
My One True Love
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Posted: November 17, 2002 5:00 PM PST; Last modified: November 17, 2002 5:00 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0238404 Overall Rank: 7381 Comments:
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god'swife @ 209.178.177.153
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18-Nov-02/1:41 PM
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Not bad. Antiquiated, but it the rythmn doesn;t detract from the sense of it. Or in ohter words you managed it without having to revert to silly sentences.
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