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Broken Glass (Lyric) by Sugarbbybuttrfly Picking up the pieces
of yet another shattered heart
Bandaging the wounds
Believed another lie
Held on too tight
And got beaten down again.
I thought you were different
I thought you weren't like him
Sneaking your way around
Hiding what the truth was
I was wrong
for the millionth time I was hurt
But I'll forgive the male species
And look again
Up the ladder:
Longing
Down the ladder:
model kit
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Posted: November 13, 2002 2:17 PM PST; Last modified: November 13, 2002 2:17 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7615943 Overall Rank: 11589 Comments:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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18-Nov-02/4:46 AM
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Kep hoping for that killer line, add more sarcasm and venom, as a man I'm interested in knowing how the perpertrator affected the perpetrated. It didnt deliver enough as a poem but as a song maybe. *5*
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