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Broken Glass (Lyric) by Sugarbbybuttrfly

Picking up the pieces of yet another shattered heart Bandaging the wounds Believed another lie Held on too tight And got beaten down again. I thought you were different I thought you weren't like him Sneaking your way around Hiding what the truth was I was wrong for the millionth time I was hurt But I'll forgive the male species And look again

Caducus 18-Nov-02/4:46 AM
Kep hoping for that killer line, add more sarcasm and venom, as a man I'm interested in knowing how the perpertrator affected the perpetrated. It didnt deliver enough as a poem but as a song maybe. *5*




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