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Truth Within (Free verse) by confuzdlilgirl
It doesnt seem important Doesnt seem to matter Can't see what's happening inside Can't see her shatter Putting on a cover Refusing to show She is falling apart inside Not letting you know She seems to be perfect Everything is right She is scared within Holding on tight She wants to be Something she cannot She wants to see Something she will not She asks of too little Receives almost none Asks for something in return Doesn't get anything from She wants to be seen For people to comprehend She isn't alright She cant be just a friend She just wants to see Why she has changed so dark Isn't happy or having any fun Only remembering a mark She hates that she is this way Just isnt the same Wants this all to end Say goodbye to this game.

Up the ladder: Being H.U.M.A.N.
Down the ladder: Sisters in Disquise

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11567
Posted: November 5, 2002 3:14 PM PST; Last modified: November 5, 2002 3:14 PM PST
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