poemranker ::Truth Within by confuzdlilgirl

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Free verse № 23898

Truth Within

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Nov 2002 · 0 comments

It doesnt seem important Doesnt seem to matter Can't see what's happening inside Can't see her shatter Putting on a cover Refusing to show She is falling apart inside Not letting you know She seems to be perfect Everything is right She is scared within Holding on tight She wants to be Something she cannot She wants to see Something she will not She asks of too little Receives almost none Asks for something in return Doesn't get anything from She wants to be seen For people to comprehend She isn't alright She cant be just a friend She just wants to see Why she has changed so dark Isn't happy or having any fun Only remembering a mark She hates that she is this way Just isnt the same Wants this all to end Say goodbye to this game.

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