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Gods Lonely Man

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Oct 2002 · Edited 23 Oct 2002 · 1 comment

I have been waiting for you the birds went home the sun went down but you are nowhere in sight and its been a long long time I've been longing for you the sweetness of your smell the ripples of your hair and its been a lonely lonely time the sweetness of sorrow the partness of love will you find me or will death get to me first the heart's desire has been burning and at times like these I wish you were near will this ever end or will I die a lonely death

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[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> 13-Jan-03/4:05 PM Reply
Horoscopes Leo July 23 - Aug. 22


Caution and
prudence are
the keywords
for the day.
The Stars are
shifting and changing, and
as they do so, they urge
you to carefully speculate
where you might usually
take a wild swing. Before
you act or speak out,
think about the
consequences your
actions might have on the
people around you. You
certainly don't want to hurt
anyone close to you,
right?" as you can see i pretty much feel the stars can fuck off.
soooo.that said. the lonely death is a warriors way. shit or get off the pot.