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Gods Lonely Man (Free verse) by Spike_Seigel
I have been waiting for you
the birds went home
the sun went down
but you are nowhere in sight
and its been a long long time
I've been longing for you
the sweetness of your smell
the ripples of your hair
and its been a lonely lonely time
the sweetness of sorrow
the partness of love
will you find me
or will death get to me first
the heart's desire
has been burning
and at times like these
I wish you were near
will this ever end
or will I die a lonely death
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Posted: October 23, 2002 8:56 PM PDT; Last modified: October 23, 2002 8:57 PM PDT
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Caution and
prudence are
the keywords
for the day.
The Stars are
shifting and changing, and
as they do so, they urge
you to carefully speculate
where you might usually
take a wild swing. Before
you act or speak out,
think about the
consequences your
actions might have on the
people around you. You
certainly don't want to hurt
anyone close to you,
right?" as you can see i pretty much feel the stars can fuck off.
soooo.that said. the lonely death is a warriors way. shit or get off the pot.