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Give Me Some Time (Lyric) by Miggy
1) I walk on the street and you pass by You try to talk but you're so shy So I just ask myself why 2) I felt so lost and I felt so blue And maybe you thought that I never knew Now I see just why you flew So... (Refrain) Give myself with you some time Then I'll show that you can be mine When I will go then you you'll see That you're the only one for me So just give me time 3) Later, I try to talk to you but just then You left me hanging again and again And when I visit, you'll be on the go But when I got you, my feelings never show So please... (Refrain) 4) When is the day? That you'll see things my way What do I lack? For you to not cut me some slack Please don't turn your back 5) I try to talk to you for just too long While others think that I'm doing this wrong So when I try with all my might I'll do my best to make this right So baby just.. (Refrain) Just give me some time

Down the ladder: Call Vegas!!!

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.36
Weighted score: 6.350898
Overall Rank: 824
Posted: October 22, 2002 1:48 PM PDT; Last modified: October 22, 2002 1:48 PM PDT
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[8] deleted user @ 162.84.159.23 | 12-May-03/5:49 PM | Reply
Not to shabby, nice work (8)
[2] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.179.231.241 | 25-May-06/8:26 AM | Reply
6) this goes on a bit
yay yay yay yay
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