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flesh and tension (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
Feeling your form in my hands
Is this how lust makes us tremble
We shake at the edge of the tension and heat
We feign this understanding to simply be
the outside world seems distant and dull
our time together means nothing to it
we couldn't have it any other way
grinding teeth have finally given way
given way to my pounding desire to
take your flesh in my mouth and
send you to the place where we became
where I find my only escape
from the dismal decay of repitition
where I can render you to fill my senses
where I become the only thing that matters
To think this wasn't love and only lust
this lie will make it sane, and perhaps even save
save one from self denial and unrequitted limerence
save one from himself and save the world a story.
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Posted: October 15, 2002 1:52 PM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2002 1:52 PM PDT
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