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Angel (Free verse) by Mutant_X An angel
wispered softly in my ear
sang the songs
that i long to hear
we danced untill the sun went down
and when he touched me
i knew i was touched by an angel
i had the perfect dream
just lookin at his eyes
i felt so pure touchin him
the way he held me that night
i will never forget
how sweet it was
to lose my self in him
he was an angel
my angel
Up the ladder:
The right one
Down the ladder:
Monday - Brewing
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Posted: October 13, 2002 2:59 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2002 4:43 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.5 Overall Rank: 12823 Comments:
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poetandknowit @ 65.101.212.11
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13-Oct-02/9:48 PM
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Good god this is bad, and correcting the typos will not make it better. Good try though. Keep it up!!
Did he have wings? Wouldn't that create an inbalance while dancing? Wouldn't you be afraid of tripping on them?
YOU TWAT you stole it go suck off a monkey cum back and write a poem about the discomft and pain of that!!!! to be honnest its too happy !!! AND also writing poems aobut angels is a god loving fucked up christian kind of thing to do go fuck your self your god too
i can't belive there are still ppl like you!! besides i aint even christian,and by the way,poetry is alot more than ur stupid shallow words
Do you listen to Santana a lot?
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