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Angel (Free verse) by Mutant_X

An angel wispered softly in my ear sang the songs that i long to hear we danced untill the sun went down and when he touched me i knew i was touched by an angel i had the perfect dream just lookin at his eyes i felt so pure touchin him the way he held me that night i will never forget how sweet it was to lose my self in him he was an angel my angel

poetandknowit 13-Oct-02/9:48 PM
Good god this is bad, and correcting the typos will not make it better. Good try though. Keep it up!!




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