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#11 (Haiku) by mikejedw our fallen maple
two centuries past its birth--
the wind has died, too
Up the ladder:
The Coming Light
Down the ladder:
Exiting Shadows
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Posted: May 14, 2002 10:06 PM PDT; Last modified: May 14, 2002 10:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.0002027 Overall Rank: 1257 Comments:
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anonymous @ 204.245.176.100
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15-May-02/10:49 AM
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yes. - aduren
A fine example of a haiku
so adept you are at packing the poem
as dialectic this is another hit! thank you
1,000 pages couldn't say it better.e
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