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Life (Free verse) by blueclouds It hurts so much this way..
Could there be something you say?
To ease the pain
That I've gained
With the life
That is not Mine
This feeling is devine
In the intertwine
Of thoughts
That borrows my sanity
In the never ending vanity
That holds deep
To the steep
And winding road
Called Life...
Up the ladder:
Cheap Thrills
Down the ladder:
Innocence lost
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Posted: October 7, 2002 2:26 PM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2002 2:26 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7515 Comments:
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jauser @ 207.220.133.234
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7-Oct-02/3:29 PM
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Good, poem, carry on. Very strong rymth.
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blueclouds @ 65.114.71.4
> jauser
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21-Oct-02/11:27 AM
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thank you :)
shit.
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