poemranker ::Life by blueclouds

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Free verse № 19102

Life

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Oct 2002 · 3 comments

It hurts so much this way.. Could there be something you say? To ease the pain That I've gained With the life That is not Mine This feeling is devine In the intertwine Of thoughts That borrows my sanity In the never ending vanity That holds deep To the steep And winding road Called Life...

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[7] jauser 7-Oct-02/3:29 PM Reply
Good, poem, carry on. Very strong rymth.
[n/a] blueclouds › jauser 21-Oct-02/11:27 AM Reply
thank you :)
[5] horus8 22-Jan-03/6:46 PM Reply
shit.