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life (Free verse) by Luke_is_Crazy life is like the sun
because it doesn't last forever
when we cry we quiver
but when we die we shall not shiver
for when the sun dies all that is left is stormy weather
Up the ladder:
i've got this song stuck in my head
Down the ladder:
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Posted: May 14, 2002 12:45 AM PDT; Last modified: May 14, 2002 12:45 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.903412 Overall Rank: 13428 Comments:
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nentwined @ 66.92.183.34
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14-May-02/1:03 AM
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cute. doesn't do much for me. I like what the first two lines could have been, maybe.
Luke your not crazy and when the sun does finally turn into a red dwarf there will be only termites and ants left to enjoy the weather. dig it??
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