life

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 May 2002 · 3 comments

life is like the sun because it doesn't last forever when we cry we quiver but when we die we shall not shiver for when the sun dies all that is left is stormy weather

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[4] nentwined 14-May-02/1:03 AM Reply

cute. doesn't do much for me. I like what the first two lines could have been, maybe.

[5] horus8 10-Jul-02/2:34 PM Reply

Luke your not crazy and when the sun does finally turn into a red dwarf there will be only termites and ants left to enjoy the weather. dig it??

[7] -=SeTTle=- 17-Jul-02/10:10 PM Reply

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