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life (Free verse) by Luke_is_Crazy

life is like the sun because it doesn't last forever when we cry we quiver but when we die we shall not shiver for when the sun dies all that is left is stormy weather

nentwined 14-May-02/1:03 AM
cute. doesn't do much for me. I like what the first two lines could have been, maybe.




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