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Another Julie (Free verse) by Brennan
A breath we took
You glanced at me
My heart called out beware
So oft we stumble judgement's grip
When beauty's eyes ensnare
Ring true the toll the bell have chimed
As night begets the day
May that which cloaks in darkness dim
Fall not in disarray
Such feeble words off crimson lips
In bifarcated heart
No tears
No trance
No tempted kiss
No stitch to seam this part
In whispers found a promised love
Where echoes but remain
And knows the soul been cast aside
No other worldly pain
Though ever waits my blinded eyes
For that which came and gone
A silent wish calls out the night
So does my heart beat on
So oft we stumble judgement's grip
So does my love beat on
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Weighted score: 4.833116
Overall Rank: 10790
Posted: September 30, 2002 10:23 PM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2002 10:23 PM PDT
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