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Gypsy Fire (Free verse) by Mutant_X
Night is her song of which to hear,i long she wispers the words softly as she moves her body around the fire her eyes are castin a spell of a charming magic as she tells a story that's tragic you can smell her perfume thru the moon so bright in this holy night where you dig,dig,dig and pray in this sacred dark she keeps dancing on the beats of our hearts while breaking mine apart.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.833116
Overall Rank: 10791
Posted: October 8, 2002 4:53 PM PDT; Last modified: October 8, 2002 4:53 PM PDT
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[6] New Life Drug @ 64.175.39.248 | 8-Oct-02/5:15 PM | Reply
why the hell do you dig?
[n/a] Mutant_X @ 212.138.47.20 > New Life Drug | 8-Oct-02/6:00 PM | Reply
coz it's about searchin for somethin that's way far,so i'm diggin and prayin and losin hope
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