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the dance (Free verse) by Aggreddion
breath to breath, thought to thought
amazingly easily giving in to the rhythm
each step known, a practiced movement
However, not this dance
this dance gains its rapture from
from________unknown step
from_____unsuspecting smile
from____interlacing fingers
how long can silent music play
can two ignorant of the silence
_continue this dance___________
_______they hope.______________
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Posted: September 26, 2002 2:43 PM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2002 2:43 PM PDT
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