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the dance (Free verse) by Aggreddion
breath to breath, thought to thought amazingly easily giving in to the rhythm each step known, a practiced movement However, not this dance this dance gains its rapture from from________unknown step from_____unsuspecting smile from____interlacing fingers how long can silent music play can two ignorant of the silence _continue this dance___________ _______they hope.______________

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5714285
Weighted score: 4.3468566
Overall Rank: 13063
Posted: September 26, 2002 2:43 PM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2002 2:43 PM PDT
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