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somewhere, i'm not (Free verse) by wrabo
Somewhere, the sun rises, and in my mind I see you beside me. Somewhere, I cradle the phone, your voice lingers in my ears. Can you still hear me? Do you still see? You're all that I am and ever will be. Somewhere, the rain starts to fall, and in my heart, I hold you close to me. Somewhere, I reach out my hand, your fingers entwine with mine. Can you still feel me? Do you still see? You are all I want and will ever need. Somewhere, the birds begin to sing, and in my soul I ache to have you near me. Somewhere, I breathe a soft lonely sigh, your whispers echo in my mind. Can you still touch me? Do you still see? You are all I dream of and forever will be. Somewhere, the clouds drift slowly by, and in my dreams I touch your lips. Somewhere, your eyes meet with mine Do you still need me? Do you still see? You are all I care about and I will always be.

Down the ladder: Second Attempt at Haiku

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.6414113
Overall Rank: 12385
Posted: September 20, 2002 7:56 AM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2002 7:56 AM PDT
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