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Lost Love (Other) by Jessina
Oh! How adoring to see my darling’s face Like a delicate flower bloomed in autumn days Her eyes so divine, with an angelic grace There she stands silent, with a charming smile, worth of praise Softly she speaks, words of innate love Gently pouring the bliss of her mellowing feel Suddenly I felt, lifting to the sky so azure above Blissful, her presence like an angel, winged my zeal But you left me all alone for days of blue Still a precious pearl to be sought True is my love, which I treasure for you Would you be mine, my fervent thought?

Down the ladder: forest morning

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10109
Posted: June 19, 2011 10:27 PM PDT; Last modified: June 19, 2011 10:27 PM PDT
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[0] Y2kSlamPoet @ 67.188.94.175 | 5-Jul-11/1:35 PM | Reply
Rubbish.
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