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proposal (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
bells buzzing in my ear bringing me back to a time when we were free from worry summer slowly fades away clouds climbing higher in the wind rapid reverberation of sound shakes the walls within a rock absorbing anger and frustration from the assault giving weight without judgement this burden born lightly, in good company love landing me on one knee to ask the question "will you marry me?"

Up the ladder: loss
Down the ladder: Always

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6952
Posted: October 18, 2008 12:36 PM PDT; Last modified: October 18, 2008 12:36 PM PDT
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