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proposal (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
bells buzzing in my ear
bringing me back to a time
when we were free from worry
summer slowly fades away
clouds climbing higher in the wind
rapid reverberation of sound
shakes the walls within
a rock absorbing anger
and frustration from the assault
giving weight without judgement
this burden born lightly, in good company
love landing me on one knee
to ask the question
"will you marry me?"
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Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6952
Posted: October 18, 2008 12:36 PM PDT; Last modified: October 18, 2008 12:36 PM PDT
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