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shape shifter (Free verse) by mogwai
You on the kitchen floor, her standing. You tracing the outline of her shadow on the floor with a magic marker, her turning too soon. You wondering why she's always changing shape.

Up the ladder: Women
Down the ladder: New Hope

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5549
Posted: September 17, 2002 1:56 AM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2002 1:56 AM PDT
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[8] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 17-Sep-02/7:21 AM | Reply
clever image.
[8] deleted user @ 167.206.181.179 | 17-Sep-02/7:40 AM | Reply
this is nice. i thought it was going to be some dorky sci-fi thing (which i probably would have liked, despite myself). something slow and creepy about these images.
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