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shape shifter (Free verse) by mogwai You on the kitchen floor,
her standing.
You tracing the outline of her shadow on the floor with a magic marker,
her turning too soon.
You wondering why she's always changing shape.
Up the ladder:
Women
Down the ladder:
New Hope
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Posted: September 17, 2002 1:56 AM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2002 1:56 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.134471 Overall Rank: 5550 Comments:
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17-Sep-02/7:21 AM
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clever image.
this is nice. i thought it was going to be some dorky sci-fi thing (which i probably would have liked, despite myself). something slow and creepy about these images.
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