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shape shifter (Free verse) by mogwai

You on the kitchen floor, her standing. You tracing the outline of her shadow on the floor with a magic marker, her turning too soon. You wondering why she's always changing shape.

balthazar 17-Sep-02/7:40 AM
this is nice. i thought it was going to be some dorky sci-fi thing (which i probably would have liked, despite myself). something slow and creepy about these images.




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