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I glimpsed the ruined world (Other) by Prince of Void
I glimpsed the ruined world From the windows of time Beating time in the bare silence of mine The vision of future is running by my side, Holding candle to my darkness The light such guidance To find the sun in the mislead impression Flaming inside what I'm chasing down Is nothing to desire for such end I justify failures in love I should burn as the candle does Which ends in no faith and no wisdom? Everything mankind does The eternal act of waiting in the void For what's been already lost

Up the ladder: Sunset
Down the ladder: Sense {non}

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6897
Posted: March 22, 2008 3:13 PM PDT; Last modified: March 22, 2008 3:13 PM PDT
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