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I'm in love (Free verse) by nicole081083
Baby, I know we are several miles apart and i know it will be a while until we are together Even with this distance between us, you have my heart And it will be yours forever and ever Now that you have my heart and my soul Please baby promise me you will not break it I honestly have fallen and lost all control And if something happened i don't think i could make it Baby, I'm in love Its strange to me, never fallen so fast You must've been sent to me from above And forever I hope this feeling will last

Up the ladder: Castle of Pandas III
Down the ladder: Owl Eyes

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9224
Posted: December 10, 2007 9:57 PM PST; Last modified: December 10, 2007 9:57 PM PST
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Comments:
[7] LynnJR @ 70.166.7.178 | 15-Dec-07/11:40 AM | Reply
lovely, heart felt and sentimental poem. nice rhyme scheme.
[0] Caducus @ 80.229.129.138 | 21-Dec-07/3:25 AM | Reply
Very generic and exclusive for two. It totally lacks originality and rhyming does not validate it as a poem.
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