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Death and the black dog (Free verse) by Caducus a black dog followed me
when i stopped it sat
whimpering.
I lost it by my house
it found me by a grave
whimpering.
A black dog barked at me
foaming omens where she stood
holding me.
A black dog lay with me
I lost it with hope
it gnarls in its sleep
but i have awoken
to blurred parents
whimpering.
Up the ladder:
Drunken Pulsars
Down the ladder:
Wish I was there...
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Posted: November 22, 2007 7:09 AM PST; Last modified: November 22, 2007 7:09 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.094852 Overall Rank: 6163 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 69.23.157.197
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22-Nov-07/12:45 PM
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I sense expectation of death in the first two stanzas. Um, I'm not going to comment just yet. I think there's more you want to say. Let it ferment, C.
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