Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Forever Inside You (Free verse) by forsaken
I got my headphones on I've got the music up real loud To try and block out the cries Of a lonely little boy What is it he wants I scream Can anyone stop his tears I wonder to myslef Has I turn the volume up The louder the music gets The more he cries and wines What is up with this boy I finally have enough of it I walk towards the bruised boy AS I begin to ask him why he suffers He looks up at me and those eyes Those eyes are mine The boy begins to laugh "You did this to yourself" He explains and then disappears Gone in the fog like he was never there My head begins to ache and throb Blood pours out of my eyes And then I awake with a cold sweat My heart punding as if I just saw A friend take his last breath in my arms I look around the room in where I sleep Nothing at first but the I see something Something in the dark of the night It's moving to me and for some reason I'm not scared as his face comes through the darkness "It's not a dream" he whispers And graps at my heart I'm forever inside you we can never be apart

Up the ladder: The Trainspotter
Down the ladder: Certain circles

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 05
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 7.714286
Weighted score: 5.729984
Overall Rank: 1835
Posted: November 5, 2007 6:33 PM PST; Last modified: November 5, 2007 6:33 PM PST
View voting details
221 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2019 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001