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Forever Moving On (Free verse) by Absorbed Intellect I'm walking on glass.
I'm walking through a hot desert.
I'm carrying this burden upon my back.
I'm not able to stop.
Forever Moving On.
This is life.
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Posted: October 24, 2007 8:07 AM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2007 8:07 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10584 Comments:
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24-Oct-07/4:24 PM
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I, as a member of the FMO, am simply stupified by the sublime accuracy of your poem.
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