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Storm Over Gypsy River (Free verse) by Skamper
a tangled sweat of naked legs
runs along a sulking river
swollen and tempting
garbled rush to fill the oceans
castoffs rage for purchase
trees reach higher with new found release
dying limbs amputated
by currents and torrents alike
metal casing amplification
of the pat pat pat
force fingers to react
untying knotted sheets
river raises its gurgling voice
demanding a place within events
roaring past hammering ears
and eyes occasional blindness
fat rain flushes over naked flesh in bumps and ripples
heat drips a constant chill â
bladder and veins
empty and fill
darkness rumbles a quieting sigh
the river expands - as expected
a final rush of lifeblood
and fluids
retreating â teasing - understanding
in tropics' sweat we meet
the fierce - the afraid
and in smoky dampness - part
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5150
Posted: September 25, 2007 10:11 PM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2007 10:11 PM PDT
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