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Still Life (Free verse) by thetrev
The metal bars drape
her trembling body with the
criss-crosses light gives
some beings as a
temporary tattoo, she
nests at the bottom.
He, however, is restlessly jerking from one perch
to another, his neck tilting, contorting, at times as stretched as a
cockerelâs.
Her under feathers
have a layer of dark crust,
the back of her neck
is raw
from his picking.
Beyond the cage, feeling
godly, I unhinge the door to
evacuate her first (a small head start).
He is already at the door; the cage has sprouted a new head,
taking aim. I cup his body in my hands, one overlapping
his beating wings, the other supporting
his ringed claws. He clings to my index to
better take off, vertically. There he
trembles, neck twitching, suspended to the same square.
She has kept quiet,
hidden behind propped
canvas. She picks at
the carpet industriously but the ruffle of her train against
the fabric give her away. Crooning, he lands on her back,
his splayed wings steady him, like a hand spread
out on a card table: âinnocentâ it says.
This time she wins, and
shakes him off. They travel through
the room, she leads him
around
the sofa,
into
the undergrowth of the writing desk and
through
the rug with its dense follicle, rising like tentacles around their
beaks.
Sticky feathers like
cupped hands follow their trail but
the light soon betrays
through the basin of the cage
their shadows returned
to the crisscross embrace.
The door
is left dangling limply open and useless.
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Posted: September 25, 2007 2:04 PM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2007 2:04 PM PDT
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