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Where could you be (Free verse) by Joi
I managed to foucus I managed to fear for the love in your heart was something to fear Your words of hate drink after drink makes me wonder what do you think Stumbling down the path the path of sorrow with each eposiode will there be a tomorrow Come and hear me now for I have much to say your games are over please stay away Your threats don't matter in my world of dreams only your behavior causes trouble and low self asteem Go to your hell that you love so much leave me alone God help you this once

Up the ladder: Castle of Pandas III
Down the ladder: POET IN THE POT

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9139
Posted: August 29, 2007 3:37 PM PDT; Last modified: August 29, 2007 3:37 PM PDT
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