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nice ta meetcha (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
Just like a pill I collect at the corners when someone pulls up on the sheets. and Just like a pill I roll right down the crack of the bed and the wall, stick between. and Just like a pill I might knock out your pain. so Take me with water or vodka the same. because Just like a pill I collect at the corners when you start to flutter your eyelids.

Up the ladder: Acoustics
Down the ladder: Him.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9187
Posted: August 3, 2006 5:04 PM PDT; Last modified: August 3, 2006 5:04 PM PDT
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