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In To Deep, Ideally (Free verse) by SomeNewKill
I found that my point in life, is to have an effect,
On many minds, and this fucking wreck.
But sometimes not, or so I thought,
Is it possible for me to surpass my mind?
To leave all reality and my memories behind.
In my life I have fears, the fear of being alone,
or being alone in fear.
Life to me is a rhythm, and death will be it's rhyme.
Within me, an endless orchestra peaks at the end of time.
I found that I look at this crash in a deeper depth,
What I did not find, I can not except.
Individually I'm beautiful, as I distinguish myself.
Featuring entities to this musical, I am an instrument,
Cased on a shelf.
Is it possible for you to have my obituary state?
That I was the saddest song ever written, according to fate.
In my life everythings a pattern, melodies collide,
Memories are left behind, and soon being afraid of loneliness,
Won't matter.
I found that my wrecking recurrence reached its peak,
Produced a result and proved true those possibilities.
Ended this rhyming, in perfect timing and concluded this musical
catastrophy.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9188
Posted: June 1, 2007 1:35 PM PDT; Last modified: June 1, 2007 1:35 PM PDT
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