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Show me the way (Free verse) by Joi As I look around
in this world so tossed
looking for support
for even that cost
With the Lord
all is free
For your love on the cross
paid for me
Show me more day by day
Please my Lord Jesus
Lead the way
Up the ladder:
hoping
Down the ladder:
Brethren, oblivion is not the road to the city Ataraxis.
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Posted: August 26, 2007 10:58 PM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2007 10:58 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.928861 Overall Rank: 9159 Comments:
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Dovina @ 12.72.42.250
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28-Aug-07/1:35 PM
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Do you read Gerald Manley Hopkins? He's pretty Christian for a Jesuit. But he elaborates in such detail it becomes finally obstacle, rather than assistance. I think you do the opposite, handing us generalities without much specific life-gouging. I'd rather see you "tossed" than hear you say you are tossed, and see these "free" things the Lord gives you.
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