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Free verse № 153695

Show me the way

by Joi

Member since 2007 · Posted 26 Aug 2007 · 1 comment

As I look around in this world so tossed looking for support for even that cost With the Lord all is free For your love on the cross paid for me Show me more day by day Please my Lord Jesus Lead the way

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[7] Dovina 28-Aug-07/1:35 PM Reply
Do you read Gerald Manley Hopkins? He's pretty Christian for a Jesuit. But he elaborates in such detail it becomes finally obstacle, rather than assistance. I think you do the opposite, handing us generalities without much specific life-gouging. I'd rather see you "tossed" than hear you say you are tossed, and see these "free" things the Lord gives you.