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Some things marinate, others poison (Free verse) by MacFrantic By the measure of my mind
Awash in toxic turpentine
Fellows chase maids, instigated
Dancing 'round chaos created
Lewd, unsteady hands
What is it you don't understand?
She's much too good for you
Even if your words ring true
Up the ladder:
Sand
Down the ladder:
Quietus Proprietus
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Posted: August 22, 2007 1:20 PM PDT; Last modified: August 22, 2007 1:21 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5934 Comments:
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24-Aug-07/7:02 AM
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chaos is much too good for me? ok then.
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