poemranker ::Some things marinate, others poison by MacFrantic

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Free verse № 153597

Some things marinate, others poison

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Aug 2007 · 1 comment

By the measure of my mind Awash in toxic turpentine Fellows chase maids, instigated Dancing 'round chaos created Lewd, unsteady hands What is it you don't understand? She's much too good for you Even if your words ring true

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[8] INTRANSIT 24-Aug-07/7:02 AM Reply
chaos is much too good for me? ok then.