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Some things marinate, others poison (Free verse) by MacFrantic

By the measure of my mind Awash in toxic turpentine Fellows chase maids, instigated Dancing 'round chaos created Lewd, unsteady hands What is it you don't understand? She's much too good for you Even if your words ring true

INTRANSIT 24-Aug-07/7:02 AM
chaos is much too good for me? ok then.




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