We are not in bed

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 1 comment

Softly Settled, us two, Slumbered Happy for the evening tide *we lit three candles* No noise, starlit evening sleep Books strech Dream along the floor *white rainbow* I couldn't wake up--? Mind is muttering Alarm bells muffled in my head *we are not in bed*

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 4.15 weighted 4.38 rank 13000 views 206 View voting details →

13 votes so far. Yours would make 14.13 votes so far

1 comment

[7] deleted user 24-Jul-04/1:17 AM Reply

it made me stop and say "hmm..."
the rhyming was done quite nicely as well, and didn't detract from the poem itself.