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We are not in bed (Free verse) by einekleine

Softly Settled, us two, Slumbered Happy for the evening tide *we lit three candles* No noise, starlit evening sleep Books strech Dream along the floor *white rainbow* I couldn't wake up--? Mind is muttering Alarm bells muffled in my head *we are not in bed*

murphy 24-Jul-04/1:17 AM
it made me stop and say "hmm..."
the rhyming was done quite nicely as well, and didn't detract from the poem itself.




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